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Short version: I like words and Buddhism and metal and video games.

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Tue Nov 3, 2009, 5:24 AM
Hey all,

"I regret to announce this is the end. I'll be going now."

...until December, when the Semester From Hell (TM) is over and done with. Leave me plenty of poems to read to my exceptionally bored mother over Christmas break. :D

I may be in briefly from time to time, but I don't have the extra energy - who knew energy would be more of a problem than time! - to invest in your work... so to read it otherwise would be to do you a disservice. Some of you are very scary and I wouldn't want to do you any kind of disservice.

Anyway, take care, and enjoy the rest of fall. :)

  • Mood: Love
  • Listening to: Wintersun
  • Reading: Kalevala
  • Watching: Firefly (sporadically)
  • Playing: lol

Devious Info

  • Current Residence: Pittsburgh, PA
  • deviantWEAR sizing preference: M
  • Interests: DnD, video games, hockey, music (performance and appreciation).
  • Favourite movie: Pulp Fiction
  • Favourite band or musician: Tool
  • Favourite genre of music: Heavy metal, orchestral, some soft rock.
  • Favourite artist: Jes LaVecchia ;)
  • Favourite poet or writer: J.R.R. Tolkien or Friedrich Nietzsche?
  • Favourite style of art: Words.
  • Favourite game: Final Fantasy X
  • Tools of the Trade: Computer, anger/sadness/awe.

Comments


:iconhurszoidunitron:
thank you much for the poetry feedback. i had my poem critiqued in class today by Thorpe Moeckel - look him up. He's a famous poet that deals with imagery very well. His poetry is my lyric than I tend to like, but his images are orgasmic. He said that he really thought my poem was strong, but I should change the title and cut some lines. I WAS SO AMAZED!
:iconhurszoidunitron:
The Blood God salutes you, sir.
:iconp1pp1n:
thank you very much for the favourite, much appreciated!

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"My soul melteth for heaviness: strengthen thou me according unto thy word."-Psalm 119:28
:iconmemoriesofporcelain:
thank you:)

and yeah i just re read it and i didn't realize it was that angry lol... heh

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I'm a statue, baby; knock me out.
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:iconvex0r:
lol It's angry, but it's good angry. You managed to get past scene-y lame angry and into scary, really meaningful angry.

Thanks for the compliments (and the watch), I know exactly what you mean :D

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Embrace this moment. Remember: we are eternal. All this pain is an illusion.

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:iconmemoriesofporcelain:
anytime! i look forward to reading more of your work :)
if you have time i'd love to hear what you think about some of my other stuff.

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I'm a statue, baby; knock me out.
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:iconvex0r:
*facepalm*

I didn't even think about it. I'll get right on it!

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